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Behind the MaskMikky JThe Back Cover:
Shakespearean Sonnet
Things I Did on MondayMikky JThe Back Cover:
What he left behind.
Jackson Jackson Gets a GlimpseMikky JThe Back Cover:
A ditty. The persistence of vengeance, and the power of beauty.
A Stranger Stepped into Her LifeMikky JThe Back Cover:
Haiku fiction. Melinda takes a chance.
Katie Sat RockingMikky JThe Back Cover:
More haiku fiction. A woman in the shower.
The Lights Look Lovely TonightMikky JThe Back Cover:
Haiku fiction. Another story in 60 words. A man entranced by the lights.
Hannah Awoke into a DreamMikky JThe Back Cover:
Haiku fiction. A woman awakes--far from home.
Delicious Iced TeaMikky JThe Back Cover:
True flash fiction. Also known as postcard fiction. I call it haiku fiction. A story in sixty words.
Sarah's Twenty-FirstMikky JThe Back Cover:
A short sketch. A birthday memory.
A Voice So ClearMikky JThe Back Cover:
In a poetry class, a young boy teaches the students something they'll never forget.
Victim seVenMikky JThe Back Cover:
A screenplay for a short horror film. Tagline: Sometimes father knows best.
IdentityMikky JThe Back Cover:
A surreal piece on self-discovery. You wake up to find someone you were not expecting.

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13/10/2011Huggable_Bubble
Hi :D I have recently put up a new story please could you read and comment :P It doesnt matter if not. It is called 'The walls whisper' thank you x
13/10/2011Huggable_Bubble
Hi :D I have recently put up a new story please could you read and comment :P It doesnt matter if not. It is called 'The walls whisper' thank you x
04/09/2011Baileyism
Hi,thanks for your comments on Once and Again. Would really appreaciate you input on my other story on here. Although it's not a short.
25/07/2011tracy allott
really sorry I had no para breaks in story, but I have tried in past when using the site to enter it again and site would not let me put in para breaks. I am hoping to put a new story on soon and check out paypal with team and hope no para breaks then. Please is you are interested in reading my work with no para breaks use Ether books iphones in app Ether books new writers free genre or get me views on all voices mag, at google search www.allvoices/users.com/Tallott thanks Tracy
07/06/2011Mr. X
Good day Mikky J. Please read my stories if you get a chance and tell me what you think. Thank you.

........MR. X
10/04/2011voicefromthegrave
Thanks for the comments Mikky.
07/04/2011bjorn-albania
I've just put up my new story "ASLEEP." If you have time, please could you read it? I would appreciate critics by you as a professional.
31/03/2011Huggable_Bubble
Hey :D have put up a new story called 'He has won' Please could you read and comment :D Doesn't matter if not x
06/03/2011Jeyssika
Aye that is very true. Only time will tell I suppose :P :/ x
06/03/2011DeathAndAllOfHisFriends
No problem
05/03/2011Jeyssika
Haa, thanks :P

Haa I'm not always quiet, I was just too nervous to be otherwise.. :) x
04/03/2011Jeyssika
Everyone keeps triple posting their comments on my profile?!

& yeah it went okay: hopefully my written parts will pull up the fact my nerves meant I was too quiet; here's to hoping :)!! x
04/03/2011Jeyssika
Mikky! How many times do I have to say: get cracking on your writing! ^_^

xxx
03/03/2011DeathAndAllOfHisFriends
Very good stories, I'll give you a follow.
18/02/2011Jeyssika
Trust me I've written 36 stories so considering how many that means you've read it's pretty impressive & flattering you'd even be bothered reading anything :P
Honestly can't thank you enough :P

Mikky man finally add my e-mail - much easier to talk to each other than this :) xx
18/02/2011Jeyssika
Due to extreme boredom I have been quantifying my story comments etc & I would like you thank your for your 14 story comments, various profile conversation and just constant support for the many, many months I've been on this site (2 months shy of a year now) and I can't thank you enough Mikky! Thankssss :D!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
14/02/2011Jeyssika
Happy Valentine's Day Mikky :) xxx
12/02/2011Jeyssika
Mikky I've already seen that; it was just kinda irrelevant to what you commented on - hence my confusion. Dear me :P x
12/02/2011Jeyssika
Yeah I love it; but yeah all teachers do have funny little stories because kids are just so strange :P x
12/02/2011voicefromthegrave
Thanks Mikky!
10/02/2011Mikky J
http://www.youtube.com/user/Hungrybear9562#p/u/1/OQSNhk5ICTI
10/02/2011Jeyssika
Mikky man what are you on about?!
09/02/2011Jeyssika
I know; didn't she take like a big break from it before? - she might be doing that again; here's to hoping she returns ^_^

& yeah I do; it has all of my poems on so far - www.wix.com/jeyssika/msjonespoetry
Enjoy dear. x
08/02/2011Jeyssika
Haha Thanking you Mikky
04/02/2011Jeyssika
Mikky man, WRITE!
03/02/2011Jeyssika
Thanks Mikky :)
Glad you liked it xx
02/02/2011Mikky J
I see your "Specificity!" comment. Thanks. I'll read it soooooon.
02/02/2011Jeyssika
Yeah I know; it happened before - either she keeps stopping her account then doing it again; not sure.
& Yeah this site has its issues but I wouldn't stop using it, how else am I meant to talk to you guys :P xx
02/02/2011Jeyssika
I don't know; I think she commented on something of mine in the past week but she might just be busy :P
Same with you & your stories ;P
xx
29/01/2011Jeyssika
Hardly I just went on your last piece & I'd commented 10 days ago on it :P

Good get going in it then ^_^

& things are gooood thanking you; how about you?? xx
28/01/2011Jeyssika
Mikkkkkkkky get writing!! 10 days too long my friend.
26/01/2011Paul
It's much appreciated! I really love your writing!
25/01/2011Jeyssika
hahaa you've turned a bit (more) insane Mikky :P xx
24/01/2011Jeyssika
If you mean about my display picture yeah I like this new one - also it makes you sound like a stalker. See: 'I SEE you now.' ;P xx
24/01/2011jacko
Thanks for your comment on The Final Question.
I'll be publishing the sequel later this week so, why don't you have a bit of fun and think of your own?
24/01/2011Jeyssika
Was going through my old comments & in November you said to me to read Wilde's Star-Child & I've just read it - thanks! It's brilliant. Good moral story but ultimately showing kindness is a hard thing to achieve & to maintain.

Good times :P (: xx
24/01/2011Jeyssika
Didn't know I'd gone anywhere? ^_^ x
22/01/2011PythonWorshipper
Your wish is my command- her nose part three is now up, it's not as good as the first two, I don't think, but read at your own leisure in any case
20/01/2011Huggable_Bubble
I am glad you liked my story 'Darkness' :D thank you for your comment. after going back and reading it again, i agree it does sound like a sex scene, it was not intended to be, but the idea is good. your comments are all welcomed and taken seriously. at first i was not sure about the whole flow and idea behind the piece, but after the positive feedback it must not be as bad as i thought. x
17/01/2011Huggable_Bubble
Hi :) i have put up a new story. please could you read it, and give me your thought. it is called 'darkness' thank yoooou x
17/01/2011tracy allott
I am very sorry about no paragraph breaks in my story; it said upload to web and this happened. Will try to edit. Tracy Allott
15/01/2011Jeyssika
It was funny to me too, it always is. But such is life (: x
15/01/2011Jeyssika
I don't think he intended it to be funny :P
But yeah thank you :) I don't see much point in sticking to one format when you can do anything with it :P :) x
12/01/2011PythonWorshipper
Oops I ran out of characters without realising, I really should rattle on so much, I meant to say it had a better rhythm to it
12/01/2011PythonWorshipper
Ahhh right, I would never have guessed now, but it's obvious when you know- very smart. That's a pretty incredible thing to be able to do, to convolute something so poetically, incredible.
And as for the channel 4 thing once again, I didn't realise you were quite so far away, so I suppose it was kind of a British thing, but don't worry it's no in-joke or anything, just that the stuff on there is usually rubbish, although not as bad as channel 5 or bbc3, but I thought channel 4 had a better...
12/01/2011PythonWorshipper
Yeh I completely understand what you say about not giving away intentions, sadly my stuff isn't complex enough that it's necessary but still.. Anyway yeh I'd love to know the intention of 'Delicious Iced Tea', if you'd be willing of course.

Thanks for your comment on mine too by the way, and the channel 4 joke didn't really make sense anyway, I like things that are nonsensical or if possible surreal, so basically I was just trying to be silly
11/01/2011Jeyssika
P.s. The picture I used for the 'You know you want to poem' the erm link is underneath your comment. It all looks better on the actual page because I changed the structure so the verses curve round the picture, but such is this site :P

P.s. Stil waiting on your piece for my R&J one ;) x
11/01/2011Jeyssika
Yeah it was meant to be one that made you think.
& yeah I know that's just how it ended up, with a longing - don't know how that happened (: But erm I think it's just that religion is such a huge thing but I mean I think it's actually faith that the world needs, something to hope in - I mean even people whom go against religion usually turn to something else instead.
Plus when I mean people don't understand - I meant they don't get all the scientific stuff.
:) x
09/01/2011Alexandra W.
Thanks so much for the nice review! I'll actually be posting a second part to that story soon.
06/01/2011Jeyssika
Perhaps, yeah that suits it more.

& do it! I'd love to read that!! I bet you could do a great job ^^ - do let me know (: xx
06/01/2011Jeyssika
Thank you; well you can only push a girl so far.

Also, I think that's the wrong word - I was a bit distracted (when am I ever not...) when I replied; I don't know the right word but even still, thanks :P :) x
04/01/2011Fats
Will do fella - :)
04/01/2011Fats
Not really mate - I'm going to free publish a novel on iBooks when I've finished editing it . . . keep getting caught up in other people's work though :) I'll e-mail you if I ever get round to it though if you're interested . . .
04/01/2011Fats
Thank you matey. I'm giving up on this - the people who run it are not paying any mind to it and people are getting more and more 'facebook' offensive. Good luck - I wish you all the best.
04/01/2011Jeyssika
Thank you :P They are quite fetching really haha x
03/01/2011skycloud86
The Monica Wood tip is basically warning against writing the "bathtub story" - a story in which the protagonist is taking a bath (or occupying some other confined space) and thinks, analyses and ruminates about all sorts, but never gets out of the bath, or the confined space.
16/12/2010mikejapope
Thank you for the comment. Exactly the kind of responses I'm looking for.
14/12/2010sydneyswift
Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate your taking time out of your day to read all of that.
10/12/2010march.postings
I am not criticizing, only questioning these sites. Though one good reason for being here is that there is no snobbery either which way, nor is there any pretence. Some readership, though little and forced, haha. And I personally like the presentation of our articles and works.
10/12/2010BazookaBritten
Yo bud, Gold-digger has finally been re-written and is up there if you fancy a read of it. Lates dude.
09/12/2010march.postings
Hi M.J. I agree this is a blogging site for writers, but I wonder and genuinely, because I love human beings, if they are not wanting to publish somewhere. I know or have learnt that many of us are unpublished,and then how is it that we as a community find a road for us all. Compassion and activism, if you may say. Let us at least become one community.
27/11/2010Jeyssika
No I haven't; so far I've only read TPODG and Lady Windemere's fan but I have a lot to read for College so it's difficult to find the time.
But yeah he did, he's impeccable.
27/11/2010Jeyssika
'But it was to teach man to concentrate himself upon the moments of a life that is itself but a moment.' - Oscar Wilde.
I like short stories about moments because that's what people remember most. Hence why The Act of Falling is but a moment. x
18/11/2010Jeyssika
Next Drink (installment) of Paint the Town Red up :)
Enjoy!
It's called Pink Lemonade. x
18/11/2010Jeyssika
Yeah, sorry again about that :P
I suppose it just seemed a tad excessive but each to their own :) x
17/11/2010Jeyssika
Oh my life! I'm so sorry, I totally understand your confusion now Mikky. I apologise, sometimes I know what I mean but I don't always say/write/type it...I meant commas!!!! So sorry :P

& thank you very much about Scotch; it's good to write a character with a complete disregard for everything - no principles, no morals...whole lotta fun ;)
17/11/2010Jeyssika
Please, call me Jess - it's odd to be called Jessica.
But what you do you mean about the colon here thing? x
14/11/2010Alan
The world needs to know of M.J. Hamada. I challenge you to write a story of unthinkable genius.
Now go about your wicked business!!
10/11/2010midnight star
Cheers for the comment, was from a song I wrote a long time ago. "Well spotted"

Regards.
09/11/2010Huggable_Bubble
Thanks for your comment. If you could could u read my other and say what yuo think about them that would be much appreciated if not it doesnt mater. thanks. '
06/11/2010Alan
Thanks for the kind words old spice, and for signing the totp petition. Your contribution im sure will help in the return of Jimmy Saville to our tv screens.
All the best.

PS. Jimmy Saville sends his regards.
05/11/2010Fats
MJ - with regards to Quixotic; Psychotic - I haven't really thought about it like that before - I suppose it is three different stories in one; bit of a cheat really :) The idea behind it was to present how love (the word, the emotion, and the concept) can be warped into different things . . . and how dangerous it can be; how close to irrationality and hatred it can be (for both parties). Thanks for your feedback - very constructive and very helpful :)
05/11/2010Fats
MJ - have you read The Strain co-authored by Guillermo del Toro and Chuck Hogan? That's a decent Vampire book as well - I keep meaning to write a review on it but haven't got around to it yet :)
04/11/2010Fats
MJ - I bought that movie ages ago and still haven't got around to watching it :( I did watch Cronos last night. Ever seen that? That's a cool little vampire flick as well.

Thanks for your comments on Angel - I'll work at the flow in dialogue if I ever get around to re-editing it :)

Thanks again :)
04/11/2010Ricriv
Sure that's one way but other than buying my way in it will still take a while.
I'm currently looking at other websites where they are happy to do what Biblio used to accept until recently.
03/11/2010Bublick
HI M J. Onion bubble tree. 2) victory story. Sorry a very simple story. The child holds an acorn. It is small and apparently lifeless. He then looks up at a once great oak tree.He is told of mighty warships and great nation saving naval battles; and he dreams. His acorn is the hms victory, and he holds the ship and englands destiny in his hand..That's all, sorry it's so simple.1 like the word synethesia by the way, never heard of it or seen it before!
03/11/2010Bublick
Hi M J. Re the onuion bubble tree. THhanks for the feedback; pretty good cfora bit of fun but now your questions. As regards the God guestion I was more puzzled as to how could make mum cry-interesting linkage though. Now the other questions. 1)fair point but think of a childs view of a bubble. it comes, it grows,it delights, then pop it goes. Like a fairy tale or a dream it has power yet no physical substance, yet it enthralls all the same.Hope that makes sense 2)see next meassge
03/11/2010Fats
Thanks for the comments. Much appreciated :)
02/11/2010Ricriv
...and so as I'm down to one Biblio buck for my sins, my last story which you kindly commented upon is my swansong unless things change - other than being able to comment on stories from good folks like yourself.

Best wishes to you and all.
01/11/2010Ricriv
Hi M J

Re Bibliobucks - the website has a section on this which explains the background.

Hope it helps

Best
01/11/2010cat
Oh! No stories yet (sad face) ! Perhaps sometime soon then please..? :)
31/10/2010gingerandy1
thanks for your comments. The spacing wasn't meant to be like that, i just didn't have the hang of how to edit on this yet. Why don't you check out my short stories and let me know what you think.
31/10/2010Jusanord
No profile. No stories? Why's that?
30/10/2010Mattius The Wise
Story soon?
30/10/2010Mattius The Wise
What is written is written. The rest is up to the reader(this is how I write all of my stories). Thanks for reading. I hope you had fun.
Think about it though...there could have been a third party saying "The plan is the only reason you're here" etc. This person isn't mentioned, but their existence depends solely on the readers' imagination.

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About Me: Me: Writer. Editor. Film guy. Writing: Poems. Short stories. Screenplays. Interests: Dream fiction. Flash fiction. Magical realism. Slipstream. Wordplay. Metaphors. Stories that are surreal, nonlinear, non-cliched.

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